DIL KHUD-SAAR HAI

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Lagte-lagte musalsal gham hi paaya hai
Iss khud-saar ne barson se dard khoob kamaaya hai,
Par dil toh aakhir dil hi hota hai, yeh aaj na roka jaayega,
Woh dekho, soorat sawaar-kar mehboob aaj phir aaya hai

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5 comments:

  1. Saadique9 November 2025 at 10:29

    Beautiful piece — soaked in melancholy yet effortlessly lyrical. The pain feels lived-in, not performed. That last line, especially, turns heartbreak into quiet surrender.

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  2. Anonymous9 November 2025 at 12:01

    Beautiful verses!! Love Hindi poetry

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  3. A Rustic Mind9 November 2025 at 12:40

    Really loved the tone and imagery in this piece—“stubborn heart”, the weight of returning love, the tension between defence and longing… beautifully done. 🎙️

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  4. Water11 November 2025 at 00:40

    You write hinid poem also. Well written.

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  5. Nilanjana Bose5 December 2025 at 15:55

    Wah! Poignant and evocative.

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